The more I see this dormant world
Eyes wide open without a twirl
I catch it dark,
and darker it gets
Thee lay on prey without regrets
Scarce is when all people have woven
Cometh an inspiration in name of women
They are high,
They come with dreams
Color of life,
Living on streams
I wonder how they shine so bright
May be
coz of their dreams upright
Waving the air being still on ground
their balloons of dream sway
Without a sound
saaranshsinghpundir 
Beautiful picture and the poem added value to it š
Pencil sketching and water colours, is it?
Yea u got it right Hargun…..i really appreciate u commenting š
My pleasure š
This is very beautiful…as always š
Thank u Maira š
Wonderful š Took me to a completely different world š
haha…..Thank u for being so kind š
Saaransh, this is awesome. I loooovvvveeee your painting. I really want to better my skill, and I just may have that opportunity, thanks to the workshop I attended in Rio.
The poem is so great too. Haha. Yes, we women are special creatures, aren’t we. Lol.
Have a wonderful week Saaransh.
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I am eagerly waiting for your next post then, want to witness the ‘Rio’ effect ..haha….kiddin…..though I know it would have helped immensely …keep going ……….and yes wisely speaking women are special creatures, unmatched and usually pure š
Hahaha. Yes, we certainly are. Hehehe.
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Ah!! Beautiful…. Your painting add value. loved it!! š
Thanx š
Pleasure is all mine dear! š
Marvelous.
Thank u š
Welcome.
Beautiful!
Thank U š
My pleasure. š
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Simply beautiful and the painting just added to the beauty of it. Keep it up š
thanx bhai š
Women as inspiration had been milestones as well vows in my life.
https://vamagandhi.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/maare-gaye-gulfaam-my-three-vows-in-life/
Wonderful poetry!
Absolute..I agree…..its like a language…wise or foul both versions……thanx for reading and appreciate ur comment š
Too good, beautiful poem !
Thank U š
aaya he mujhe fir yaad vo zaalim gujra jamaana bachapan ka;haaye re akele chod ke jaana fhir nahi aana bachapan ka……….kagaj ki naav nahi jindgi janaab;hota he aur kuch vo nahi jo hota he khwaab.
bahut khoob ..umda
yah to Devar mouvie ka gana he .mujhe bahut pasand he.
Oh acha ..mujhe nhi pta tha..sunana padega
do u not like my comment?if yes ,sorry for all dat.
I love ur comments….its just that I cudn’t make it here for sometime now
wait,wait,for somtimes.u will learn more then me.do’nt worry;janaab!!hina rang laati he paththar pe ghisne ke baad;gazal aur nilharte hain vqat gujarne ke saath.
Agree š
This is beautifully written. I loved it all you are very talented
Thank u so very much m gratified to the core :D…u made my day M
š you’re welcome my friend
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