I looked through the pores of city lights
Found none but mystery
Some voices said, some eyes unheard
and faces gloom to treachery
I vexed few lines of charcoal
Pushed them harsh
achieve no grace
Few travel bugs and enthusiasts
Came with songs of reckless praise
to oblique me and bring me sultry
Some voices said, some eyes unheard
and faces gloom to treachery
Clout of light is concubine of dark
Where dark is a patient riddle
riddles are born on gutters of street
beneath stripped flesh of reality
I longed for a friend in empty crowds
Truthful and viscous essentially
Could only find frames without a shadow
Endangered heart with mucous of banality
Some voices said some eyes unheard
And โtheirโ faces gloom to treachery
Wow, amazing piece of words ๐๐ป๐๐ป
Thank You so much ‘Sunshine’ :D…I always appreciate ur words ๐
after a long time ๐ ๐
Ha ha ha ….and again I messed up ๐
Wanna read ur work soon ๐
hehehe
Saaransh, I adore what you have captured here in, โBANALITYโ. Dark and brooding, yet with feelings of longing and a need for belonging. The repeat is wonderful, and the last repeat with โtheirโ makes your words quite powerful. I paused for a long time and reflected when I read, โWhere dark is a patient riddleโ, isnโt it? The artwork is superb, and mirrors your words beautifully, and yes, you did achieve grace. ๐ As always a stunning post and presentation. Please have a wonderful day, wishing you well. ~ Mia ๐
Some thing melts inside when someone catches the soul of your writing, isn’t it ….thank u Mia, u jst did that ๐ ….. m more than glad ‘Banality’ somewhat made its mark…happy ๐
You are one kind and intrinsic support to my work …m always happy to see u here ๐
I’ll b visiting u soon to sweep wat I have been missing all this while
Take care Mia..Stay blessed always ๐
Saaransh, it’s my pleasure to enjoy what you’ve created. Your work makes me think, and look into myself, that’s great art! Wishing you a wonderful weekend, take good care and stay blessed too. ๐
Thank u Mia….u always make me smile ๐
Hope u r fine and doing good ๐ …. will b visiting ur blog for all those I lagged all this while ๐
Lovely
Thank You Simona ๐
Happy Sunday โค
Well well well the incredible artist does it again. Yet another masterpiece I love it well done S
Thank You So much Morgan ….I love seeing u here….been off the loop ….will catch ur work soon ……..hope u doing fine ๐
This is a powerfully dark piece. Almost haunting in a sense. Your sketch is perfect for it as well Saaransh. You always post amazing pieces, my friend.
I hope you are well. Please have a wonderful week.
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Thank You so much Staci…U r always are a support I can b confident about …..thank u for such kind words….How u doing?…hope ur work turned out great ๐
You are sooooo welcome Saaransh. I am doing fine thanks. Super busy, lots on my plate at the moment, but I’m well.
My project is coming along, but not finished yet. Probably in the first half of next year. I’ve decided to take my time with it.
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O WOW Staci … I hope it turned out to be absolutely fab
Sorry for the late reply though
Ohhhhh, heyyyyyy Saaransh. So good to hear from you. You disappeared, my friend.
No worries on the late reply. I was away for a number of months myself, just recently returning.
Hope you’re well.
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Its nice to hear from u too……….. yes m all well, hope u having a good time too ๐
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Deep, Deep, introspection. This poem describes hitting rock bottom and loneliness; so perfectly. The artwork is haunting too. Your rhyme scheme is unique and flowing. Im really impressed.
Thanks a Lot…its really amazing when someone feels as close as I felt while writing ๐
M humbled by ur gracious words…Take care ๐
I agree. No problem. Thanks for challenging my brain.
Pleasure ๐
wattt a complex piece of art!
I m sure this confuses all and creates lots of effects in the viewers views and imaginations!
For world is a confused place to live !
And a lovely poetry!
love that emphasis and repetition !
Saraansh u r so wonderful poet and artist !
keep sketching
keep writing &
n don’t forget to smile! : )
take care
‘For world is a confused place to live !’…. absolutely…hands down
I always admire how clearly u imbibe poetry ..love it ๐
Thank U jyotee…I love seeing ur comments…m glad I found u here…. U r always a support ๐
But where are you ???
At your word place …now!
Dark but so true.. especially this line “I longed for a friend in empty crowds Truthful and viscous essentially” ..searching for blunt and true people.. a never ending struggle… nd the dark further riddles it up ๐ such poetry๐
Hey thanks Mridul… appreciate ur words, and it really is a never ending struggle
Hope U doing fine girl…wat I have been missing??….. wanna read ur work as soon as possible ๐
Saraansh bhai. . You touched me with this poem. . I can feel the pain and words here. Sometimes we become banal in such a way that we give plastic smiles, just breathe not live and start assuming that even brightness is dark. These type of feelings are hard to overcome, we need good inspiration for that and that too from within. The picture is so haunting. It says it all. Good work bhai. . Your sketches are master pieces. .
Have a beautiful week ahead. ๐
Thanks Brother, u always r so generous with ur words, m humbled ๐
Its true we need inspiration all our life to keep going…. how? that is an issue ๐ฎ …but for sure ur blog is one place to find one ๐
Hope u doing fine Jackie
You deserve it bhai. True bhai.. We need inspiration to keep going. We are all in search of that how.. Haha..
Wow.. And thanks Bhai..
Yes.. I was on a long long break from WordPress. . I am fine. And how are you?
Good brother….keep posting ๐
Hi Saarangsh, the words and feelings are so true that it touched me very much. And the sketch is wonderful. One more thing, Saarangsh. Can you explain me the phrase ” some eyes unheard”?
Thank U so much Sayanti and m so pleased to know it ‘touched’ u ๐
By ‘some eyes unheard’ I meant emotions of truest order … which unfortunately is happily neglected in our times.
All is good?
No sound
Hey my Ms. Charmer …hope u doing good ๐
Yes m fine, was a bit entangled.. and now i wanna read a lot of u soon ๐
Where in the world were you ?????
Hey…dealing with the unpoetic world :)….. hope u doing good
Tragic Poetry, beautifully worded!!
Love the nude too!! Excellent!!
Why hasn’t there been anything new?? Hope all’s well!!
Yes Mate ..allz good…. just a bit entangled.
Thanks Nuwan for all those kind words ๐
Good to hear man!! Hope you get back to the world blogging soon!! ๐
Yeaa….struggling ..yet trying…wanna read ur new stuff too ๐
Hi I already follow your fab blog, so thought I would share that I am super excited as I am officially in the running for the UK BLOG AWARDS 2017! If you could click the link and choose FoodandDrink&Lifestyle on the drop down menu:
http://blogawardsuk.co.uk/ukba2017/entries/forkwardthinkingfoodinista
Thank you kindly in advance your vote is much appreciated๏
Melanie xx
https://forkwardthinkingfoodinista.wordpress.com/2016/12/15/stop-there-is-still-time-to-have-your-say/
M extremely sorry …i wasn’t here all this while
I hope u won though
Hi, Aw no need to apologise…its totally cool ๐ x
Loved it!Very well crafted.
Thanks Akansha, its a pleasure ๐
hiii… I am back from the dark world… lol Where are you?
Ha Ha..perhaps I too drenched it that dark world all this while…… Hope u doing good ๐
Will b visiting ur place soon ๐
Hey Saaransh ๐
Happy New YEar ๐
Long time no see?
Hii Dhwani ……though its too late, Happy New Year 2 u 2.
Was a bit entangled… hope u r very fine ๐
will b soon visiting ur word place ๐
Look who’z here ๐
I don’t mind late new years, I mind no new years heheh
I hope everything is all right ๐
Haha…yes everything is fine …hope u doing well ๐
Yeah super awesome ๐๐
wr r u
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How are you bro? Prolong absence from blogging? Is everything fine?
Yeah Bro…was just a bit entangled … thanks for asking ๐
This is really awesome!!!
Check out my blog also to experience the magic of letters.
Hope you will like it. ๐
Thank U
Will surely visit it soon ๐
Thanks ๐
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Great. Play of words was amazing. You have managed to capture the image really well. There is a certain feeling of getting lost in the city. A certain hollowness. You have command of the language. Keep up the good work. I also write. Check out my blog https://iamgayatriblog.wordpress.com
Thank You Gayatri… I really appreciate u reading and liking it ๐
Yea I wud love to read ur work.
Stay happy ๐
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